Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Westward 2014: Promontory

145 year, 3 months, and 24 days ago the Transcontinental Railroad was joined. Promontory Summit, Utah was the place to be! But get this it wasn’t planned, not really. You see due to the fact that Congress hadn’t given solid instructions on where to meet the two companies just kept building. They were spurred on by the fact that they got paid for building more track. This meant they over shot each other by 250 miles. And Promontory was chosen to be the place for them to meet.

So I’d assume they did what they had been doing and laid track till they met. And there was a ceremony on 10 May 1869 where the last spike was driven (by Leland Stanford the president of the Central Pacific Railroad) and the Union Pacific’s No. 119 and the Central Pacific’s Jupiter high fived…. Okay so they touched cowcatchers and everyone gathered for a pictures.



Why was this such a huge deal? Well anyone who’s gone through middle school has had the pleasure of learning about the Transcontinental Railroad. But here’s a little run down to refresh your memory. Railroads were gaining popularity in the east for travel and shipping of goods. Two routes were brought to the attention of congress for the possibility of building the Central Route (Omaha to Sacramento) or the Southern Route (across Texas to Los Angeles). The Central route was chosen, fun fact it was pretty close to the Oregon Trail path, hey it worked for pioneers why not the railroad? So President Lincoln signed the Pacific Railroad act into law in 1862. This law set up the two companies and gave them land to build on. It also set out the wages. They would be paid per mile of track and paid more for track built in mountains versus the plains. The Central Pacific had the task of going through the Sierra Nevada’s, which meant most of the time the only way to progress was to blast their way through the mountains. Their high tech blasting technique allowed them to blast about one foot a day. The longest tunnel they built was 1659 feet long but there were a total of 15. Talk about time consuming. At least they didn’t have to deal with Native Americans, that was the Union Pacific’s lot. The Natives would raid the work sites and cause trouble, totally justified might I add because the land the government “granted” the railroad was in fact the native’s land. The 1,776 miles of tracks were built by the Irish who fought in the Civil War (Union Pacific), Mormon workers (in Utah) and Chinese immigrants (Central Pacific).

Let’s talk about the tracks for a second.


The ones on the left are the Central Pacific track style. Since there weren’t mills about they cut their own tracks see how they were pointed at the end. And the ones on the right are the Union Pacific style where they were able to use pretty ones freshly milled just for them. And that one in the middle is this….


Just a fancy one for the park.


And in that picture just to the left of the fancy tie in the ground there is a spike. Apparently it’s just inches from where the original golden spike was driven in. If you want to know more about the spikes… spikes, there were four of them check out the pamphlet on them here.

The trains.

Jupiter



No.119







Now I thought the trains were really bad a**. Why? Because they are replicas of the originals. Now they didn’t have any blueprints of these engines so the guy who commissioned them got together with smart train people and they looked at pictures and other engines of the time to recreate these bad boys. And they’re not just pretty faces…

They actually work!!

You actually get to climb in them and have a look about if you want.

It was hot. Like boiling. Hahaha. Train fun facts! So the Union Pacific ran on coal since that was an abundant resource in the east. And around the coal bin is where they house the water. You’d think thousands of gallons would tide the engine over for a while. Nope they had a range of about 30 miles. And as the one engineer pointed out if you looked at the old west there would be towns every 30 or so miles. Because there would be water station and the town would build up around it. The Central Pacific ran on wood since that was easy enough to get there. But they too had the same water issue. As you can see in the pictures they have the two different stacks. The UP is lacking the cone because they covered mostly flat plains and fires I suppose weren’t a concern. While the CP has the funnel at the top to keep embers from causing forest fires. And here’s the ultimate fun part. So before the railroad it would cost at least a thousand dollars and weeks to cross the states. The railroad made it possible to traverser the U.S. in about a week for as low as $65 or $136 if you wanted to go first class. The top speed of these trains was about 35 miles an hour. Which for back in the day was fast. More fun train stories can be found here. Like if you want to know why Jupiter and the No. 119 weren't the trains that were supposed to be at Promontory. Or why the original celebration date of May 8th was moved to May 10th.

And that’s Golden Spike National Historic Site with a side of history! A few more pictures of the ride to and from because I’m still not over the mountains here.






Cheers,


Thursday, August 28, 2014

The Wild West

I’m out west! As you know I’ve been out here since the 8th. And so far it’s been a whirlwind of one adventure after another. The first day I was here we dropped my bags at the house and went off to the county fair. There were animals…





^Honestly look at the Duck's hair.... crazy!^





And a Water Buffalo!


I’d never been to a county fair. You see the quaint fairs in tv shows and what not. You know where they judge pies and cakes and jams. Apparently it’s a real thing.






I laughed a bit over it.

Then that night I was dragged to the clubs. I offered to DD because I wanted to get the feel for the club scene. We stayed out till almost 3am so it was a tough 45 minutes home for me since I’d been up since 5:30 the day before. But it was worth if… the people watching! Oh I love my people watching!

The next day we went to Promontory**. 

Then Lagoon the day after. It’s a theme park. My favourite ride was the one that went from one side to the other. The views were great!



^Feetsies!^ 



I had a few days of down time to finish adjusting to the altitude. It was hitting me really hard, headaches and nausea, the whole nine yards!

The next adventure was the Dino Park!! **

My second weekend out here was supposed to be a wee little trip to Idaho and Craters of the Moon**. What ended up happening was an impromptu road trip to Yellowstone!**

A week of resting and working on my manuscript left me well rested for the grand adventure to California!**

And that all pretty much catches you up to where I am now, post Cali pre weekend adventure.

Now the ** next to places I’ve been are there to let you know that they are getting their own blog posts! So hang tight while I now proceed to take ages to put together the posts and post them!


Cheers,


Friday, August 8, 2014

New Adventures

Good Morning ladies and Gents,

I’ve been super insanely busy since the SCBWI conference over a month ago. Real life and all that.

After the conference I had a lot to think about with my book. So I tackled that head on. I redirected a few of my ideas that I was going to tone down for it to be a young adult book. In retrospect I should have known I couldn’t hack YA with my series when I was considering toning down two story arcs. I did a whole lot of writing, almost 20,000 words worth! Woo! Last week I decided I decided to take a character out. Camber was supposed to be the snake in the group who wasn’t really for the good, you need that cliché person sometimes. It was like walking through peanut butter when I had to write scenes with her. I couldn’t make her a fake likable and enjoy writing for her because I just started to hate her and how manipulative she was getting. And when you don’t enjoy writing a character nothing is fun with them around, they’re like the friend you invite out but hope they don’t come and when they do they ruin all the fun. So Camber got cut. It was only 75 pages that needed reworking. It took me over a week. Eek I know ages, but I have a good reason.

My good reason? I’ve been in PA babysitting during the week. I lived with my pseudo sisters three weeks out of the last five. Last week we were at the beach and it was amazing! I really missed the beach this summer so I enjoyed getting up and putting my bathing suit right on and skimboarding and lotioning up and all things beachy! This week we just hung out and ate a lot of ice cream. Yesterday we stuck to the hobbit eating schedule for the main reason that we wanted ice cream early and I didn’t want their parents to accuse me of ruining their children by giving them ice cream for breakfast. So we had ice cream for elevenses. Totally justified right? Plus it was Owowcow ice cream. It’s just about the best ice cream ever, it’s local ingredients so it’s super hipster as well as tasty. Needless to say by the end of the day I was feeling a bit on the fat side having eaten every two hours essentially. Props to the hobbits for eating so much and staying in shape. It was also fun babysitting because the girls are 13 and 8 so they’re in that phase where sometimes they whine, so I got to whine back. I used to hate when my mum did that to me so it was gratifying to do it to someone else. I’m turning into my parents but that’s okay, they’re snarky so it works.

Aside from babysitting and writing I’ve been hitting up my local coffee shop. I’ve got to give then a shout out because Harvest Café just opened in High Bridge and when I’ve been home I hit it up almost every day. Their mocha’s are the most amazing things ever! And they’ve got amazing gluten free brownies and they have organic options so not only is it tasty it’s good for you! I’m a bit sad that I’m leaving for a bit because I’ve been dying to have a good coffee shop close to home so I could have a place to act like a real writer and write. Alas I must wait till I get back from my adventures.

And what adventures are these you ask? I’m heading out west. I’m going to hang out with a friend in Utah for 6 weeks. His husband just came over from China so I’m going to be “Americanising” him, whatever that actually means. I’ll be teaching him how to drive and pretty much just hanging out with him a ton. Plus weekend excursions! Such as Salt Lake Comic Con, Las Vegas, San Francisco, and hitting up National Parks out there. So it’s going to be a grand time of gallivanting about in the west. Then I’m jetting to Nebraska to visit Sheridan. We’re going to cause trouble in Nebraska and have fun…. Well as much fun as one can have in Nebraska I suppose.  

So expect blogging to be a bit more frequent then it has been. I’m bringing my lovely boyfriend Felix with me. Incase I’ve failed to mention Felix is my new macbook. It’s a bit weird to be traveling with a laptop. I feel sophisticated. I’m chilling at gate 33 in Newark and blogging. I’ve blogged traveling before, but from my Nook. So this is crazy and fun. And I’m doing my normal gig of carry on only. I’ve missed my trusty backpack, it was nice to break it out last night and pack. I’ve had the travel itch really bad these last few months and it’s already feeling good to be at the airport!

As you all know I’m crazy about airports and all things airporty. I got here at 7h40 and my flight boards at 9h55… yup I love airports. Security was insanely quick this morning. When I was getting my ID checked the guy at the desk said I was too perky. I’m fine with that, people need to be perkier at airports. I mean come on people you’re about to take off and go somewhere! Plus come on take off is the best part! And I favour of boring you all with more rattling on and perkiness I’m going to read. I’m staring Fighting Pax by Robind Jarvis.

Cheers,



Wednesday, July 2, 2014

The Dirty Little Secret of the NJ SCBWI

Remember when I was doing my Blogging Challenge? You’ll remember that it failed epically and that I talked about seeing Laini Taylor. In my Laini Taylor post I talked about how she pointed me toward the SCBWI for finding an agent.
  
Well I got my shit together and registered. It cost me almost but not quite $500. This was the fee for the two days and my agent one on one. Now here’s the nasty little secret about the NJ SCBWI Conference….. It’s worth every single penny!! I'm not joking. I would pay twice as much and still be happy about this conference. 

Seriously. I don’t know what I was expecting but I was fencing about it all. When I registered I got my fancy profresh nametag and it had a cute little heart sticker, so everyone would know I was a first timer. If I remember correctly there were 280 something of us attending.

Everyone was social and chatty. I made some good friends. And trust me when I say I’m a shy person and it was impossible to be shy. Everyone was friendly. I can’t say it enough, everyone is happy to see you.

For those of you who don’t know what the SCBWI conference is it’s two days of workshops about writing and/or illustrating. I got to pick my workshops and took some killer ones. I’ll give you a run down and some advice that I got from each.

First off Floyd Cooper was the opening keynote speaker. Now I’m not up with the illustrating world so I didn’t know who he was till I saw some of his paintings. Turns out I know a lot of his paintings. He also did a demo of how he paints. He starts by basing the art board with paint (or something I forget the technical name) then he takes an eraser and subtracts till he has a photo. Never heard of Floyd Cooper? I bet you’ve seen these….




Best practices for the author/agent Relationship w/ Marie Lamba and Tracey Baptiste
This one was a good start to the conference. Because I came into this weekend as a relative newbie (more on this later). I got some great advice from Tracy on querying agents, such as the fact that you should “cyber stalk” them to see if they really are a match for your manuscript and to keep a list of when you sent what to what agents.

The seven secrets of series success with Amy Cloud and Debbie Dadey
So this one was insanely cool because come on it’s Debbie Dadey! I grew up with her books. They were soooooo popular when I was a kid. It’s so inspirational to see that her first book is celebrating 25 years this year, it’s still in print and she’s still producing new books! Like holy hell! Plus it was cool to see that she has a “bible” of character info. Psst… I have one of those for mine. So I’m not that weird. Yay!!

Then it was lunchie Muncies! I was in line being all shy not planning on making conversation with anyone around me because hell I didn’t want to bother someone by being awkward. But the lady in front of me and her friend turn around and strike up a conversation with me. They were so nice and the one lady was talking about her book and it sounded so good but I being me forgot to ask if it was published because I’m so dumb sometimes.

After lunch I had a first page critique with Amy Cloud, Simon and Schuster and Meredith Mundy, Sterling Publishing. So a first page critique is where you anonymously hand in your first page and the editors give their first reactions and critiques to it. I thought it was so cool to get their feed back. I got some good stuff because I handed in my prologue that I’ve been fencing about.

What to expect When You’re expecting a novel: Between acquisition and publication with Yvonne Ventresca
This was by far one of the best workshops I went to. So I walked into the room and the nice lady from the lunch line was giving the talk. I felt so effing stupid! On the bright side I bought her book! so far it’s really good. It’s called Pandemic.

And since it just came out last month she really knew what happened between getting an agent, singing the contract and the steps between then and the book hitting the shelf. What I loved was the fact that it’s current information, not old info. I’ve had such a hard time finding information on what to expect. And I don’t want to over offer info that isn’t mine but Yvonne said that she would be putting info up on her blog so you should totally check it out. Plus she has some great posts. Once I get further into my own book expecting I’ll blog about it myself instead of high jacking Yvonne’s amazing presentation.

Best (and unfortunately sometimes worst) Beginnings for novels with Quinlan Lee
This was my last workshop on the first day  and I was sooooo tired (I woke at 5 am for the day). I was looking forward to this because the beginnings of novels are so important. In the first 3 minutes I was totally hooked. Quinlan was so energetic and it was so much fun. My favourite bit was the analogy Quinlan made. She said a bad beginning was like a bad date or a bad dog. They were perfect and she laid it out with humour and I loved it!

At the end of the first day they had a staff social where you could mingle and have a drink before dinner. I skipped the social because honestly I didn’t know what I would do other then stand about awkwardly. Plus I really didn’t want to bother the agents and editors and I hadn’t really talked with a lot of people. Plus I had an hours drive home and I was exhausted. Excuses I know but I don’t think I missed much.

The second day started off just as grand as the first day. Kathy Temeanl gave a Sate of theMarket talk. It was crazy interesting to know about what I call the “insider” information. For instance did you know that Penguin Books and Random House merged? Or that Harper Collins bought Harlequin? I didn’t either till last Sunday. It was a really interesting report because I found out that the publishing industry as a whole is growing. Apparently the last five or so years has been a massive struggle for the publishing industry. It gives me hope to know that the industry is picking up, it means I’ll have a better chance of getting published! Wooo!! Also Kathy has the whole lecture on her blog, so you should hop on over and check it out.

After the state of the market speech it was time for my agent one on one with Sarah LaPolla. Nervous is an understatement for what I felt. I had been stealing myself all week for her to be like “well it’s a good concept but your writing isn’t strong enough to support the plot.” I had dressed in my one pair of professional pants and made sure I looked like an author and went for it.

It was actually an eye opening fifteen minutes. Now I’ll be honest that my understanding of the YA genre was a bit sketchy before the weekend. And one of the things Sarah said was that the main characters were going to be too old to classify it as YA. She said it would make a decent adult fantasy book. But also the fact if I did decide to go that way then it would be really tough because of the competition and the fact that it’s a male dominated genre, but that she wanted to see a strong female break into the genre.

I left feeling a lot better then I had been prepared to feel. I had opted not to take a workshop the first block since I would be missing the beginning of it and didn’t want to walk in fifteen minutes into it. So I grabbed a coffee sat down and text everyone to gush over the fact that I was doing something right!

My next workshop was another first page critique with Julie Matysik, Sky Pony Press and Carter Hasegawa, Candlewick. They gave me some good pointers like the fact that I could cut out the first four paragraphs and get right to the good stuff. Taking their idea a step further I decided to start a bit further in and weave the world building in there. Super helpful shit went on there!


The Dialogue Dilemma with Kami Kinard
When I had signed up for this workshop I took it because it was the only one that appealed to me in that last block. It turned out to be a really good workshop. I learned the low down on Said. And the fact that most editors like to see said instead of another word or lots of adverbs. Plus obviously actions speak louder than words so you could just have a character roll their eyes in response instead of saying something. So this workshop turned out to be really good.

The Dialogue Dilemma was my last workshop for the conference. Boo. But there was still lunch and the closing keynot. I was actually nervous about going to lunch because one of the only tables left open when I signed up was for Sarah’s table. So I almost skipped lunch, but I was hungry and I decided I wouldn’t sit close to Sarah.

Well turns out there was only one person between Sarah and I. I started lunch off being quiet and paid attention to the conversation. Then at one point the people on my left started a conversation separate from the people on my right and I didn’t know which way to go so I just awkwardly sat there till one of the women pulled me into conversation. Like I said everyone at the conference was nice. Then we got on the topic of the YA genre and how everyone else at the table was had to go without appropriate teen books. And I was like well I can’t complain that way because I was essentially the target age when the YA genre boomed. When I said I was only 23 Sarah was impressed. She said she thought I was older because my writing was mature. I’m not going to lie I almost started crying at lunch.
I had gone into the whole weekend not thinking that my writing would even stack up to everyone else there. And to hear and editor say that I was good at what I did made the conference. One of the women at the conference who had been in talks with Sarah about being represented pointed out to me that Sarah doesn’t have to compliment people, that she meant what she said because she’s not hear to make friends or smooze up to the authors. It was such a reassurance to know that I’m not a horrible writer.

The closing keynote speaker was Rachael Vail. She was absolutely fantastic and inspiring. She was the perfect way to end such a good weekend.

But now I’ve got lots of work to do. If I’m going to make it in the adult fantasy genre I’m stepping my game up. No holding back. I’m going to write epic shit. So I’ve made myself an office in the sunroom and I’m starting to get up earlier to write for a few hours in the morning. I want to finish my manuscript by the end of summer and have an agent by my birthday. No more being a pansy! I’m going hardcore! So thank you NJ SCBWI and Sarah LaPolla for helping me make up my mind on what genre I’m writing!

Cheers,